As far as editing, there is not a lot of creativity here, but the music selection was good. The content was very nice, but then comes a big issue.. why such bad quality video with such good content? AA would have been nice to remove the jaggies that no doubt hurt the final image quality and the compression was a bit ugly.
The editor of this video could make a masterpiece if he wanted.
Can I ask why your team name is H.A.T.E. ? It is not obvious to me why you chose that name.