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bAtesy
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I'll comment later.
P.S - Some screenshots would be helpful
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Posted: 4.17.06 @ 12:32 PM
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bAtesy
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If this is indeed your first movie, then it is fairly good.
There are a few things that need to be brushed up on to make your next production (if there is one) much better than this.
Pros:
+ CTF action is always nice
+ Quality was adequate
+ Decent frags
Cons:
- HUD was showing, either crop the image to hide it or turn it off in game, I hate to see HUD
- Players names, by this I mean, if there are a number of different guys fragging in the same movie (like this one?) maybe their name should be shown in a corner somewhere. If it was just you fragging, then it's my mistake that I didn't know
- When a song ends, it needs to be cleaned up. It seemed abit messy. Also, you used different types of genre in this movie, which is good, but it sounds horrible when you mix them together in a fade in/fade out/fade in type mix between tracks. Maybe the video should have faded to a black screen whilst the audio did so, then wait a second or two, then introduce the next song along with video. Would have been alot more easier on the ears.
- Spamcup...if you won it, congratulations, but it really isn't something to put into a movie, especially ANDaction. Sorry.
- No RypelCam. The spectator type views of flag caps would have looked alot better if you had have used RypelCam. Look at the Scrofulous movie, the flagcap scenes in that movie nice because of the RypelCam. I know it's a hard tool to use, but if you can learn how to use it, your movies will look much more nicer.
Overall, this movie is good for a first try. Hopefully, other movie makers will reply with constructive comments and not to shit on your work.
Looking forward to seeing your next production if there is one.
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mrGa
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1. you are right but when i started to capture this files i didnot realise how could this look like... total noob i know^^
2. movie is whole my sceens accept 2 from shark and 1 from smoke... smtg like that [they couldnt give me demos cos i was on isdn]
3. songs sucked somewhere and i know it... it sounds kinda shitty especialy some crickling noise on the track before last.
4. spamcup looks boring but it was such a thrill and memory so i had to put it into the movie... more sentimental then realy estetic part of the movie.
5. ryplecam did not egzist at time i made this movie. atleast not as far as i knew. this movie was finished by 1.7.2005.
Thank you very mutch. I didnt expect good and constructive critic like that.
Thanks.
I will produce more and my next movie will be The Vulture Zone or KRKANI movie.
btw where can i ask someone for help when i stuck with some problems. I tried with pming but accept azzazel who is realy helpful there is realy noone else who is answering to me.
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yoyo
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average.
my movie -fragged_by_yoyo_Part1.2-http://www.own-age.com/vids/video.aspx?id=6362
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bAtesy
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| mrGa wrote: | 1. you are right but when i started to capture this files i didnot realise how could this look like... total noob i know^^
2. movie is whole my sceens accept 2 from shark and 1 from smoke... smtg like that [they couldnt give me demos cos i was on isdn]
3. songs sucked somewhere and i know it... it sounds kinda shitty especialy some crickling noise on the track before last.
4. spamcup looks boring but it was such a thrill and memory so i had to put it into the movie... more sentimental then realy estetic part of the movie.
5. ryplecam did not egzist at time i made this movie. atleast not as far as i knew. this movie was finished by 1.7.2005.
Thank you very mutch. I didnt expect good and constructive critic like that.
Thanks.
I will produce more and my next movie will be The Vulture Zone or KRKANI movie.
btw where can i ask someone for help when i stuck with some problems. I tried with pming but accept azzazel who is realy helpful there is realy noone else who is answering to me. |
#creative-pictures
#crystal-creators
#shoalinproductions
Those are a few IRC channels off the top of my head. I don't play UT much now, but those channels you can visit and get alot of help.
KRKANI movie, were you in [K] for the opencup this autumn?
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mrGa
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i was recruited before first cup win...:)
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`Bradz-
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| yoyo wrote: |
average.
my movie -fragged_by_yoyo_Part1.2-http://www.own-age.com/vids/video.aspx?id=6362 |
rofl average...yoyo, anyones movies are better then urs, so in that case, compaired to ur movies, movies like this are 'good' |
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