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Annubis
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for the first mov ist's a really good one!
I like it ...
but for the next one some things:
- Hide Hud ... or Hide the Health and weappon bar
- maybe take Widescreen ... so in the mov u will dont see things like the Demo view Speed
- look at the Grexiser screen ... u can see a bit of the backgound on the top and the bottom
- Take "Ultra High" Details / Textures etc. for Capturing ...
- I think, that the RypelCam views are a bit too long
- The Color effect after the First Cam view (since about 9:17) is better for things, where it cath the "story" ... maybe after taking amp or an adrenalin combo or sth. like this
- maybe u should dont take effect- transitions like the "Page Peel" effekt
- I like the Outro with the Redeemer .. but the Atom-bomb explosions? ... hum ...
- music and music cut is good
- the mostly editing work is good too
go one ... i will be happy to see an next movie of u
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DarkSonic
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- Turmion Katilot = <3. Great choice, I loved it.
- Content wise, you had some really great frags. Although most of them were from TAM pubs, which is a double dose of bad. TAM isn't exactly frag video material, and pubs are generally filled with lesser skilled players.
- Quality was awful.
- Bad use of effects.
Overall I still enjoyed the video. Work on getting better quality and get better at editting and you'll be making some very good movies. ;) |
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grex
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hi, thx the comm.
-i wanted to hide the hud with widescreen but i dont know how to reach it.
-jeah Grexiser screen is lol. i havent noticed that part yet:P
-ultra high details? 3200 amd not enough for that, with fraps..
-page peel, lol, ok. but i like that, it looks funny :P
and dont forget, this isnt a contest video for editing championship or etc, its just a funny ut2k4 fragmovie. next will be better, and a little bit professional. i promise :P |
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grex
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hm
i make some minutes with dumpframes but it was boring. one min took half an hour....
fraps can record 1024 quality, but the video would be twice bigger.
and i used almost everything what i found out in vegas :P |
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GinZzA
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grex
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| hm, jeah i know. im not proud of my frags. i wanted to make a simple movie. |
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Robzilla
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downloading edit later.
Edit: I liked it alot...some of the kills weren't that great but all that matters is you made them look good which people don't realize is the key we want to see in movies...
Dumpframes would have made it 20% better:) since you really didn't focus on having a 50/50 music and sound...(besides the headshots and hitsounds)
I really have no room to talk on editing or synching since I have not yet made a movie but from what I saw the rypelcam synching was nicely done but the long points of colors till the frag was made is a tad stupid imo (such as screen all green or negatives...a good example is the first frag NOT the beginning intro because that was nicely done but where the screen is all negative colors till the frag was made...just a lil bit noob) also the transitions with the page peel is a lil noob but since it was done fast I really didn't notice it much...and can't take off points:)
To take off the HUD and whatnot just hit the "-" key a lot of times(or go to your settings under HUD and hit "Hide HUD" and then go to your settings and make your crosshair scale 0 as to hide it completely or just set "none" on the crosshair list" and what that person was talking about was your settings under..."appearance...(or something like that)" before using fraps you shoulda turned all the coronas and special graphics to "highest" then start fraps...
I'm not one to enjoy the screaming music and yelling pointlessly but you didn't make the movie for me especially so I can't really take points off:)
edit: oh and about the frags being all pub kills...it wasn't that bad because it was hard to tell since the players weren't all total noobs...I mean they were dodging and whatnot like any decent player...and I noticed that I was expecting something ELSE after the kill you were trying to show...imo you didn't delete enough off the end where you showed the frag you wanted to show...we don't need to see that you ran away after you got a nice kill :-P
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Robzilla
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Btw are you planning on making a second movie?
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grex
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j-eah maybe. after at least one year demo collecting :P so the frags going to the be best in the world...
-and i know how to hide hud....toggleScreenshotMode....
- the scenes cutted for the music. so sry the "filling" seconds...
- and u know, in pubs, not only the noobs playin. u can find there quite pro players from the most highskilled clans.
-negative colours lol ok. as i said this isnt a contest movie... |
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Morpheus-
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Screenshot mode sux imo, cause it hides text like "You killed xy" or when u change weapon, its name. Hide hud in the menu, turn everything off Hide hud unchecked, and the clock should be only on (u can tur it on in rypelcam, i think with "n" or "m") and hud scale the lowest, and opacity aroud 50% (to make the clock fade but still visible to know where the frag is, no need to totally turn it off cause not too disturbin if its small)
Using fraps instead of dumpframes was a stupid idea (sorry, but using fraps cause dumpframes is boring is a bit funny imo), and we can see it on quality. U should record in 1024x768 full high everything on and with dumpframes. I didnt like the music, not my taste, and lots of the frags were usual frags. But for first movie not too bad, u have to learn moviemaking:) ah, and btw, the "1x" text in the left lower corner shouldnt be there as ur cpu temp in the left upper corner.
and pub frags should be out of the question, shouldnt be in a movie (only when u cant see that its a pub frag:) )
Overall: 3/10
My movie(s):
Alas - the Second UT3 FragMovie
Farewell UT2004 - UT2004 Fragging
Morph... - UT2004 Fragging
FlashBack - UT2004 Fragging |
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Robzilla
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| grex wrote: | j-eah maybe. after at least one year demo collecting :P so the frags going to the be best in the world...
-and i know how to hide hud....toggleScreenshotMode....
- the scenes cutted for the music. so sry the "filling" seconds...
- and u know, in pubs, not only the noobs playin. u can find there quite pro players from the most highskilled clans.
-negative colours lol ok. as i said this isnt a contest movie... |
colors--- I'm not saying totally get rid of the negative colors...I mean they are cool and all for about one second...or a flash on screen...never more than like 5 or more seconds.
pub kills---And I wasn't bashing you on the pub kills...since most all were against clan players(that I could read anyway)
ya for the scenes cutting to trying to snych---...make it black or...something...I'm not sure...but looking for who your going to kill next then switching screens is annoying XD
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Robzilla
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| Morpheus- wrote: | Screenshot mode sux imo, cause it hides text like "You killed xy" or when u change weapon, its name. Hide hud in the menu, turn everything off Hide hud unchecked, and the clock should be only on (u can tur it on in rypelcam, i think with "n" or "m") and hud scale the lowest, and opacity aroud 50% (to make the clock fade but still visible to know where the frag is, no need to totally turn it off cause not too disturbin if its small)
Using fraps instead of dumpframes was a stupid idea (sorry, but using fraps cause dumpframes is boring is a bit funny imo), and we can see it on quality. U should record in 1024x768 full high everything on and with dumpframes. I didnt like the music, not my taste, and lots of the frags were usual frags. But for first movie not too bad, u have to learn moviemaking:) ah, and btw, the "1x" text in the left lower corner shouldnt be there as ur cpu temp in the left upper corner.
and pub frags should be out of the question, shouldnt be in a movie (only when u cant see that its a pub frag:) )
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I'm sorry Morpheus but have you made a movie? Because dumpframes takes a hella lot of time and if he just wanted to make something quick and nice then fraps was the best idea(although true)
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grex
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| én beszélni magyar túú, amugy leszarom kimit szól, többet nemirom le hogy nem versenyt nyerni akartam hanem simán csinálni egy szájbabaszott múvit. fragekre se vok büszke, egyikrese. dehát onnantól hogy körülnézel és kipróbálsz 4 videószerkeszto progit. majd 5 vagy 6 nap múlva kész a full múvi, szentem elég jólett. |
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grex
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oh, thx all the negative advice.
this is my movie and i think, i made a decision when i use effects. who knows what i want?
and im sure, numerous nubs can beat u down 10:0.... at least
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Robzilla
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| grex wrote: | oh, thx all the negative advice.
this is my movie and i think, i made a decision when i use effects. who knows what i want?
and im sure, numerous nubs can beat u down 10:0.... at least
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grex
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| among others to morpf |
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Morpheus-
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omg, m8 whats with u? posting comments to movies if for positive AND negative critics, not only for "oh how cool is ur vid" style comment. get a life. and yes, i was doing 1-2 projects, only trying to make movie, and yes, dumpframes takes a lot of time but much better quality than fraps. u shouldnt take negative comments as offense, ppl only say what he feels after watching ur movie. and yes i have a rly old 1,5 years old trailer taht was made with fraps, with hud and it was shitty, it was only to try moviemakin out, but still i dont tell shit to ppl who said that this and this is not ok in ur vid.
and last but not least, when u make a movie u should give everything into it imo, or if u dont, then dont take critics as offence.
My movie(s):
Alas - the Second UT3 FragMovie
Farewell UT2004 - UT2004 Fragging
Morph... - UT2004 Fragging
FlashBack - UT2004 Fragging |
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grex
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yo, pm sent
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